career#

  • Series: lecture-dp

  • File: lectures/career.md

  • Audit date: 2026-05-28

  • Categories audited: writing, math, code, jax, figures, references, links, admonitions

  • Overall score: 7.9 / 10

  • Priority: LOW

Score breakdown#

Category

Score

One-line note

Writing

7/10

“Model Features” H3 Title Case.

Math

8/10

\nonumber inside aligned; otherwise clean.

Code

8/10

Unicode Greek; pip install at top; PEP8; figsize 5×.

JAX

out of scope

not a JAX lecture.

Figures

6/10

One static PNG figure; figsize 5×; no embedded titles.

References

8/10

“Derek Neal {cite}…” — narrative-author misuse; otherwise clean.

Links

9/10

No raw cross-series URLs.

Admonitions

9/10

Excellent use of exercise-start/exercise-end/solution-start with labels and dropdown.

Issues#

Critical#

None found.

High severity#

None found.

Medium severity#

  • [qe-writing-006] — H3 heading ### Model Features (60) in Title Case.

  • [qe-fig-002] — Static PNG figure career_solutions_ex1_py.png used as expected output of an exercise (line 372). Prefer code-generated figures.

  • [qe-fig-001]figsize= set 5 times.

  • [qe-ref-001] — Narrative-author citation “Derek Neal ” (line 43). Should be {cite:t}.

Low severity#

  • [qe-math-001]\nonumber used inside aligned (lines 123-124); it has no effect outside numbered align* and clutters source.

  • [qe-writing-001] — A couple of multi-sentence paragraphs.

Strengths#

  • Lecture title correctly Title Case.

  • \mathbb{E} used (line 101).

  • Most H2/H3 headings sentence case (“Overview”, “Model”, “Implementation”, “Exercises”).

  • Equation labels with {eq} references used cleanly.

  • No transpose violations, no bold vectors, no align-inside-$$ issues, no i.i.d..

  • pip install at top; Unicode Greek in code (θ, ϵ, β).

  • Exercises use exercise-start/exercise-end with :label: and {image} directive properly nested.

  • Solutions use :class: dropdown.