mccall_model_with_sep_markov#

  • Series: lecture-dp

  • File: lectures/mccall_model_with_sep_markov.md

  • Audit date: 2026-05-28

  • Categories audited: writing, math, code, jax, figures, references, links, admonitions

  • Overall score: 8.2 / 10

  • Priority: LOW

Score breakdown#

Category

Score

One-line note

Writing

8/10

Sentence-case headings; one “iid” slip.

Math

9/10

\mathbb{1} used correctly for indicator; clean math.

Code

7/10

Unicode Greek; pip install at top; PEP8; figsize 5×.

JAX

out of scope

uses JAX, but JAX rules out of scope.

Figures

7/10

One ax.set_title(...) with f-string; figsize 5×; lowercase labels.

References

N/A

No {cite} directives.

Links

9/10

{doc} used 3×; no raw cross-series URLs.

Admonitions

9/10

Exercise + solution-start with dropdown.

Issues#

Critical#

None found.

High severity#

None found.

Medium severity#

  • [qe-writing-009 (proposed)] — “iid” used in narrative on line 713. Should be “IID”.

  • [qe-fig-003] — One f-string ax.set_title(f'Cross-sectional distribution at t={t_snapshot}, ...') (line 880).

  • [qe-fig-001] — figsize= set 5 times.

Low severity#

  • [qe-writing-001] — A few multi-sentence paragraphs (e.g. 43-47, 700-706, 720-726).

Strengths#

  • Lecture title correctly Title Case.

  • All H2/H3 headings sentence case.

  • \mathbb{1} used for the indicator (line 734).

  • No transpose violations; no bold vectors; equation labels and references clean.

  • “IID” correctly capitalised elsewhere (e.g. line 41, line 100).

  • pip install at top; Unicode Greek in code.

  • {doc} used for cross-series.

  • Exercise uses {exercise} + solution-start with :class: dropdown.